Intro : My First Poem...
The great Saurav Ganguly gave the bowler an easy catch...
And the crowd yelled, "Yahoo! Now that he is gone India will win the match!"
And then I walked onto the pitch...
If I win this match I will be famous and rich...
But the problem was we needed 6 runs to win from 1 ball...
And if we lose then that would mean India’s fall...
The ecstatic crowd began to cheer...
And the fiery bowler began to near...
My heavy bat was in my fragile hand...
The only active organ in my body was my sweat gland...
And then the ball came speeding through the air...
And I swung my bat madly without any care...
Thwack! My off stump flew...
And I looked into the sky above that was blue...
And I said, "Thank you GOD for helping me..."
"The ball had hit the stumps and not any part of me!"
5 comments:
a bit childish, written in the poet's earlier days, I presume
Rating : 2/5 [:I ]
I feel the poet has concentrated more on rhyming than the theme(if there is one).
ratings-2/5
lol lol lol lol lol
well it was funny.. but whether it was a poem is well.. debatable
well the poem was pretty funny but the poet is a freakin loser
ramc poem again....the touch of simplicity clearly visible yet again!!!!:D
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